[AM] Yagura

Name:Yondaime Mizukage Yagura
Aka:Three-Tails' jinchūriki
Role:Semi-carry
SubRole:Ganker




Stats:
Damage:37-42
Range:125
Armor:2
Movement Speed: 305

Growth:
Str:17 + (2.0)
Agi: 20 +( 2.5)
Int:18 + (2.0)

Quote :

Sangoshō
Flavor:Yagura strikes the opponent with a powerful blow, causing a large formation of coral to quickly grow from the initial point of contact reducing the enemy movement.
Spell Type:Active/Selfbuff/Debuff
Targets:Enemy units




Mana Cost:40/50/70/80
Cooldown:10
Cast Time:N/A
Damage Type:Magic damage
Range:N/A
Duration:5 seconds
Radius:N/A

Effects:Yagura's autoattacks are empowered for the next 5 seconds, dealing 10/15/20/25 additional magic damage on-hit and and slowing the target by 5% on each hit max slow 30%

Quote :

Iosbu powerball attack
Flavor:Yagura transforms into Iosobu for doing a powerfull powerball attack.
Spell Type:Active spell/self buff
Targets:Enemy units




Mana Cost:75/100/125/150
Cooldown:16/15/14/13 seconds
Cast Time:0.0
Damage Type:Magic damage
Range:N/A
Duration:7 seconds
Impact Radius:200

Effects:Yagura enters in a rolling ball state for up to 7 seconds, constantly accelerating from an initial bonus 3% move speed up to a bonus 150% move speed. Upon impacting with an enemy, all nearby enemies will be knocked back for an instant and be dealt 125/150/175/200 magic damage. Additionally, targets affected by the impact will be taunted for 3 seconds.

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Suiton: Mizukagami no Jutsu
Flavor:The user creates a large, flat, circular pool of water in front of their opponent. Its surface acts like a mirror, perfectly reflecting the attacking targets and defending the user.
Spell Type:Active/Self Buff
Targets:Enemy units.




Mana Cost:125
Cooldown:10
Cast Time:N/A
Damage Type:Physical damage
Duration:4 seconds
Range:N/A
Radius:N/a

Passive effect:Yagura takes 8 / 10 / 12 / 14 reduced physical damage
Effects:Everytime he gets attacked he returns 15/25/35/45 phyisical damage under the form of an illusion from the enemy that attacked him

Note:Everytime when an enemy performs and attack on Yagura when this spell is activ an illusion appear and perform 1 attack dealing x damage and the illusion dissapear if the enemy will perfom again an attack the illusion appear again.

Every time an illiusion attack they lower the armor by 2.

The illusion can not be destroyed

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Suiton: Suishōha
Flavor:Yagura release a tidal wave around himself dealing damage to enemies
Spell Type:Active/Self buff
Targets:enemy units




Mana Cost:200
Cooldown:90
Cast Time:N/A
Damage Type:Magic Damage
Range:N/A
Duration:6 seconds
Radius:300


Effects:Yagura release a water weave around himself for 6 seconds dealing 45/55/65 magic damage to nearby units each second. Yagura can move, attack and use other abilities while the spell is in effect.Also Yagura gets a bonus 10/15/25% bonus AS.

looks pretty ^^ yagura indded should be added

Bruiser is not a sub-role. Also, your hero is more of a semi-carry than a ganker because you have a good amount of spells that synergize with him as an auto attacker, than as someone that can stun or slow a target from a distance to prevent them from escaping.

#1. You need to stop making scaling reduction armor spells on a hero with carry potential. It makes your hero way too imbalanced. Also, this spell does way too much. Bonus damage, scaling armor reduction and slow.

#2. CD needs to be scaled better and when you impact enemy heroes it should mini-stun and end the spell.

#3. Why no unit collision on this spell? Shouldn't that be part of the 2nd spell after X seconds? The damage mitigation and damage return aspects of the spell should just be passive effects.

#4. You have no mana cost and a 200 second CD. Seems like you didn't finish the spell info. Anyway, make the spell deal composite damage, so it isn't an imba tower killing spell.

Cut Chemist wrote:

Bruiser is not a sub-role. Also, your hero is more of a semi-carry than a ganker because you have a good amount of spells that synergize with him as an auto attacker, than as someone that can stun or slow a target from a distance to prevent them from escaping.

#1. You need to stop making scaling reduction armor spells on a hero with carry potential. It makes your hero way too imbalanced. Also, this spell does way too much. Bonus damage, scaling armor reduction and slow.

#2. CD needs to be scaled better and when you impact enemy heroes it should mini-stun and end the spell.

#3. Why no unit collision on this spell? Shouldn't that be part of the 2nd spell after X seconds? The damage mitigation and damage return aspects of the spell should just be passive effects.

#4. You have no mana cost and a 200 second CD. Seems like you didn't finish the spell info. Anyway, make the spell deal composite damage, so it isn't an imba tower killing spell.

well i thought so that it might get carry-ish i wasnt sure...and i relayd more on 2nd for ganking thats why i opted for ganker...but i guess semi-carry is more than a ganker

1.removed the armor reduction

2.increesed the cd and scaled

3.removed the unit colision-i thaught of some different mechanic with the other spells..but i guess it wont work after all

Added a passive effect

The illusion now lowers the armor on attack.

4:added cd and mc also i didnt get what u meant by composite damage i understand that a spell that affects the tower might op so i removed that to.

Composite is mixed damage (part magic, part physical).

Cut Chemist wrote:

Composite is mixed damage (part magic, part physical).

i removed the damage on towers part and some other changes....how are things now?

Hangun do you know that eol Yagura would be a 100% in dont you?

appart from that the meta of the game is more based on Dota than lol.

The suggestion inst bad, btw Brusier = Semi-carry ask kovak if you want or check BBB ex forum in the role list correction that kovak made.

Natsu wrote:

Hangun do you know that eol Yagura would be a 100% in dont you?

appart from that the meta of the game is more based on Dota than lol.

The suggestion inst bad, btw Brusier = Semi-carry ask kovak if you want or check BBB ex forum in the role list correction that kovak made.

i just posted my ideea here for feedbacks and C&C the same way i did with my han

idc if its gonna be used or not....

dose it matter on wich game is nwu based on?as long as the concept works and it makes what it should.

bruiser,semi-carry w.e its only just a name

hangun wrote:

i just posted my ideea here for feedbacks and C&C the same way i did with my han

idc if its gonna be used or not....

dose it matter on wich game is nwu based on?as long as the concept works and it makes what it should.

bruiser,semi-carry w.e its only just a name

Lol Meta game ≠ Dota meta game, so... it does matter.

Cut Chemist wrote:

hangun wrote:

i just posted my ideea here for feedbacks and C&C the same way i did with my han

idc if its gonna be used or not....

dose it matter on wich game is nwu based on?as long as the concept works and it makes what it should.

bruiser,semi-carry w.e its only just a name

Lol Meta game ≠ Dota meta game, so... it does matter.

sure there are diffrences betwen those two games

but in this case of my concept is more of dota..than from lol so i dont see how is that a problem.

hangun wrote:

sure there are differences between those two games

but in this case of my concept is more of dota..than from lol so i dont see how is that a problem.

Problem arises from using roles from LoL to define your hero. NWU is based off of Dota and the limitations items, from Dota, have upon a hero. To my knowledge NWU doesn't have items specifically from LoL, meaning roles that could be accomplished in LoL because of said items, along with w/e you select as your spells are not possible.

lol on the picture it says 3rd, when he should be 4th

2. Not enough info about the spell, im forced to wonder if it looks like Tuskar's snowball or Bara's charge. If its tuskar's version then the duration 7 seconds is quite low, you didnt mention if you can be attacked while in rolling state

3. im pretty sure you can do better with that spell rather than copy Centaur's damage back effect and give it a reduced damage...and what is the point of 2 armor reduction on all levels? very little creativity shown

4. firstly its Tobirama's spell which Yagura hasnt been shown to use; but yeah this spell is good i suppose, quite simple maybe

Cut Chemist wrote:

hangun wrote:

sure there are differences between those two games

but in this case of my concept is more of dota..than from lol so i dont see how is that a problem.

Problem arises from using roles from LoL to define your hero. NWU is based off of Dota and the limitations items, from Dota, have upon a hero. To my knowledge NWU doesn't have items specifically from LoL, meaning roles that could be accomplished in LoL because of said items, along with w/e you select as your spells are not possible.

i dont see how my concept is related to any of lol meta..because of passive/active spell?

lol concepts got low cd and low everything for spaming spells on lane to harras ur enemy and deny his farming..my concept is made after dota concepts.

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2. Not enough info about the spell, im forced to wonder if it looks like Tuskar's snowball or Bara's charge. If its tuskar's version then the duration 7 seconds is quite low, you didnt mention if you can be attacked while in rolling state

3. im pretty sure you can do better with that spell rather than copy Centaur's damage back effect and give it a reduced damage...and what is the point of 2 armor reduction on all levels? very little creativity shown

4. firstly its Tobirama's spell which Yagura hasnt been shown to use; but yeah this spell is good i suppose, quite simple maybe

its more like bara charge but without point targe and a bit more differen
and yes he can be attacked while in this form or even disabled

idk that good centaur from dota but since it had his revamps and im not updated with it..but from what i know from old centaur this spell has nothing to do with it....basiclly u activate the spell and if someone attacks u a clone of the somone appears and hits u making x damage and lower ur armor wich stacks with each attack. and -2 armor on early game is enouhg

ulti the name its just a name...that matters less...and the concept of ulti is less is more simple but usefull and what it needs.

I thought your concept was related to lol and its meta because it said: "Brusier"

Eitherway, it just didn't make sense to me, or Natsu, I think, that you would use the LoL term when this game is dota based. That's all. Just change it to...

Role: Semi-carry
Sub-role: Ganker

Cut Chemist wrote:

I thought your concept was related to lol and its meta because it said: "Brusier"

Eitherway, it just didn't make sense to me, or Natsu, I think, that you would use the LoL term when this game is dota based. That's all. Just change it to...

Role: Semi-carry
Sub-role: Ganker

those are only numbers and letter...wich matters less .. i presented here my concept wich shoulda be the important thing here...ofc it isnt perfect ...i wanted to show the concept and the design of the heroe and not the names and the numbers.

hangun wrote:

those are only numbers and letter...wich matters less .. i presented here my concept wich shoulda be the important thing here...ofc it isnt perfect ...i wanted to show the concept and the design of the heroe and not the names and the numbers.

The role you choose for is possibly more significant than the #'s presented. Don't dimiss it so easily. The role(s) are what guides feedback, in part. So, if you insert a role that doesn't exist within the Dota meta game that hinders the ability to give feedback.